Alternate title pages for Chapter 4

 

 

This Christmas picture has the
awkward feel of a family portrait
taken just after a nasty fight.

 

 

 

  

Good image, but too sexy for this story. I blame Utena. The wrench just kind of happened, but I think it may become his trademark. He's both a technician and 'a wrench in the works.'

Alternate title page for Chapter 4. Aside from the design flaws, he looks a little too "W Juliet." He had a hat on at first, but it didn't suit him.

I may find a way to salvage part of this for later use.